i'm surprised people think the dance was more shown off in this one.. except for the dance break/bridge, i thought the dance scenes on the field made it so you couldn't really see the formation dance and all that.
that being said, i totally love this.
i see both the pros and the cons, and i see why UF made their own version (whether they did so before or after learning what Shibue's vision for his version was). Shibue has a ton of creativity, an awesome sense of humor, unique perspective, great ideas, and a good style and eye, talent with CG, but he needs to learn to edit more. it's a common problem for artists.. it's hard to let go of cool elements/ideas/shots/etc, but if you want something to be truly outstanding you have to be able to let go of a lot. that's why they say less is more.. most of us will watch this video multiple times, but casual viewers won't. if it looked a little messy/chaotic on first watch, they won't get a chance to watch it again to appreciate the little things.
also the video editing itself was lacking something, maybe more angles or i dunno.. i'm not a filmmaker lol. and maybe that stuff could have improved with more time or a bigger budget, but if he were doing non-contest PV's he probably wouldn't get much flexibility on those things either.
i guess i spoke mostly about the cons, but i really really enjoy this, and will be watching many more times, and daydreaming of how freaking flawless it would have been (like MV award, or at least viral video, flawless) as more of a collaboration between Shibue and UF/another director (cuz it definitely felt like 95% Shibue.. which makes sense for a contest) and with more time/money/promotion.